Only one small error and thats torchic evolves into combusken and then blaziken (sorry if i spelt it wrong) but that's just nitpicking. Love your designs :)

I'm going to kill you UNTIL YOU ARE DEAD!!!!!

That was amazing... I think that was better written than most novels :) definitely 5 Stars!

Its a good game but it needs more actions, eggs and possibly a medal or two would be good (say for reaching a higher trainer rank). Maybe include the actions and eggs in a shop interface where you get X amount of coins for hatching an egg and with those coins you can buy licenses to hatch different types of eggs and different activities to do with them XD